Frozen in my Dreams
02.10.09
I got hooked with helium when I first wrote an article in the Creative Writing section entitled “Writing for the love of Writing.” Ranked number one on the first day, but stayed in the number two spot since. After that, I told myself, maybe this is a promising move after all. Joining a writers group is one step, having them comment and rank me, is another. With all the work that has to be done during the day, writing is a breath of fresh air.
I
That day was quiet when you came
I thought you wanted to see me again
But you told me, that you were leaving for good
I tried to stop you, pleaded, but I failed.
Chorus
This life has no meaning when you left.
My heart is screaming but you just can’t hear me
I’m moving on with a gap in my life now
Your memory is frozen in my dreams.
II
You said, that I was not the right one for you
How come it felt like deep inside, you wanted me too.
You opted to find this love for yourself
To capture that feeling you never felt with me.
Repeat Chorus:
III
I stand alone calling your name,
There are no echoes of your grace
Life has been sweet, back when we were one.
Just a boy and a girl who were deeply in love
Repeat Chorus
IV
When I look back to our memories
I still feel the warmth of your kiss
But every time, I see your face
I feel betrayed when you left me here.
Repeat Chorus
Coda:
You are the reason I knew this life
But when you left, this song just died…
There is no such thing as instant glory. Meaning, this song didn’t fare well with the ratings. So, edited it into a poem for, but, it went down even further. It’s ok, of course, for a newbie like me. It brings me satisfaction just to be seen and my works to be appreciated.
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About the author: Zorlone
Zorlone, an anagram of my name. A title fitting to this blog of mine. Words are created every time such as blogs created online. This site will showcase thoughts translated into words. Dream. Create. Inspire. Follow me in Twitter @Zorlone or visit me too at 140 Flash Fiction.
College Poems
Running
Not Enough
Appetite for music
Into the Pub (Inspired by the challenge: Where the wild things are) 
Surreal Window
A Future Expected
Second Chances
Finding answers
You’re right Lorenz, what is important is that we are able to express what we feel in print, more fulfilling to know that we are being read. Believe me, you’re a good writer, so in no time at all you’ll be gaining followers and friends.
All the best!
Thanks Jen!
One of the reasons why I posted this here is the hope that a singer or band (not exactly the groups I mentioned in my text message to you), would find this and contact me ASAP.
Thanks for following up on me.
Zorlone
Dear Doc Z,
This edited song is awesome. This is a real story which touches my heart. Loving a person which is not fated for you make you suffer. Well, I live in our memories, at least in my life, I experience to be happy and to fell in-love, I have no regret after all.
Nice song Doc Z, keep up the good work!! Idol talaga kita…hehehe..thanks for sharing your talents
Star,
Thank you for sharing about this song. I know that a lot of people can relate to this. If you want, I can sing the chorus for you. hehehe.
Z
Wow, really Doc Z? I am so much interested if you will sing the whole song for me..maybe I will ask your ym so that I can request you to sing this song. hehehe..I am looking forward to hear your voice Doc Z.
Star,
The chorus, not the whole song. hehehe! I’ll twit you my ym. But I’ll charge you via Paypal if you want to hear my voice! LOL!
Z
This is decently good!!! It is very… sweet and leaning more towards poetry indeed. A couple of acoustic strokes, mid-tempo and strings will add magic here.
On this note, you might be interested to check on my songs, “Friend”, “I miss you”, “I stay awake” and “Time”. I have a feeling that your song shall fit the same feel and genre.
You should write more songs. I, for one, shall surely read. Cheers!!!
Hey Bro,
Thanks! I just got back online again. I will go over your songs.
Z