A Gentle Touch

A Gentle Touch

04.12.09

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I undress you with my lustful desire,

loving every curve, each flaw is afire.

These are perfect mistakes an artist drew,

priced to infinity, a masterpiece that is you.

Your kiss is a gentle touch upon my face,

tender and loving I bind you in embrace.

My body growls hungrily for your presence,

a whiff of your scent vows the start of my soul’s essence.

The caress of your skin electrifies,

each one of my senses, every nerve excites.

Heightened perception of agony,

emotions ignite caressing your body.

Hungry for your presence, hurting to stay away,

it pains to let go and leave you in dismay.

Magnum opus – all memories latched,

triggered by the power of your gentle touch.

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About the author: Zorlone

Zorlone, an anagram of my name. A title fitting to this blog of mine. Words are created every time such as blogs created online. This site will showcase thoughts translated into words. Dream. Create. Inspire. Follow me in Twitter @Zorlone or visit me too at 140 Flash Fiction.

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33 Comments

At 2009.04.12 16:44, Scotty's Princess said:

This is one very sensual poem Dokie! Dapat talaga poetry blog natong ZORLONE, hehehe!

Another great piece!

Well done!

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At 2009.04.12 16:48, zorlone said:

Lainy,

That’s the plan! Soon to concentrate on creative writing. I will inform you once I make a new blog.

Thanks!

Z

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At 2009.04.12 17:05, Jena Isle said:

Hello Z,

You know, I’m gonna cry for “release” if you keep writing these erotic poems…lol….They’re so titillating. My hats off to you!

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At 2009.04.12 17:29, zorlone said:

Jen,
I’m glad you found your muse! Mine is still undecided if she wants to be found or not. LOL!
Thanks!

Z

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At 2009.04.12 22:48, deepteshpoetry said:

U blew me away.Surely u remember me?Pls chk out my ghostly poem.

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At 2009.04.12 23:11, deepteshpoetry said:

Thanks for ur comment Zorlone.U c the sensuousness of this poem touched my heart.So physical n perceivable.Yet not gross.I’ll take part in Woof again for sure.If u find time, c the last post on my blog…the poem.I’ll like 2 have ur comment on that.

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At 2009.04.12 23:23, zorlone said:

Deeptesh,
I remember you dude! Fellow WOOF winner! he he he!
I am going through your poems but which is the last poem? The one with almost 55 comments?

Just tell me which one, anyway, I will go over them in a while.

Z

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At 2009.04.12 23:43, deepteshpoetry said:

That’s appreciated.I’ll add ur link too.Do add me.I’m signing out now.U better mail me all ur links.N it’ll be nice to talk 2 u about poetry on my mail.I’ll vote for u.My mail is deepteshinflames@gmail.com

Bye the way,my blog description beneath the title is an anagram too.C if u can figure it out.Let me know.Mail me.It’ll be nice 2 hear 4m u pal.

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At 2009.04.12 23:44, deepteshpoetry said:

N oh…there’s a poem on my blog called ‘Musings’ which u haven’t seen.Appeared in the papers.C that poem if possible n let me know.Bye now.

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At 2009.04.13 00:08, zorlone said:

Ok, got that! Will take a look at your title description and let’s see if I can make something out of it.

Thanks for the link too!

Z

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At 2009.04.13 06:03, jodapoet said:

Ah, I am in sensual heaven right now after reading those erotic prose. Thank you.

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At 2009.04.13 07:13, ""rare*jonRez"" said:

yay! makes me reminisce the thrill of “my first time!” lol i’m partly kidding and not!

very nice composition doc!

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At 2009.04.13 09:53, zorlone said:

@Jo,
I’m glad you like it. I was working on that title at helium when I realized a titillating topic is appropriate (unfortunately it ranks low at the helium site, maybe not their cup of tea).

Thanks for the support!

@rarejoRez,

Oh… you know what they say about jokes? They are half meant! At lease you are honest about it. Poetry is an expression of emotions brought into writing. This is just a part of those emotions because we can’t really capture their whole essence.

Z

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At 2009.04.13 10:16, ally said:

well done!!! hehehe, very sensual!!! love it!

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At 2009.04.13 13:17, zorlone said:

@Ally,

Thanks! I haven’t been dropping since yesterday, I’m a bit busy. But will make my regular drops to my new found friends and my favorite bloggers tonight.

@Star,

Have you seen this poem? I haven’t heard from you.

Z

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At 2009.04.13 19:38, Star-chuu said:

Doc Z, just read. I’m sorry I miss this wonderful piece of yours. Anyway, you remind my so called first love (my wonderful experience), I don’t know when I experience again..hahaha…never mind.

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At 2009.04.14 01:34, zorlone said:

Star,
You didn’t miss this post. he he he! i reminded you about it, through the chatbox and here in the comment space, so you didn’t miss out on the fun.

Hey, don’t say that… you shall experience that again! maybe soon!

Z

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At 2009.04.14 05:37, Susan Helene Gottfried said:

Magnum opus… I like that idea. Very cool.

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At 2009.04.15 00:43, tashabud said:

Hi Z,
This poem truly conveyed your feelings and emotions for that particular woman in your dreams. I’m rooting for you to find that one special lady you’ve been dreaming of. So that, eventually, you have someone real to dedicate your “Romantic” poems. LOL.

Tasha

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At 2009.04.15 08:06, zorlone said:

Susan,
Nice to see you again visiting my posts. Yeah, I like that word a lot too!

Tasha,
Thank you! It seems that I write better when I am frustrated, than when I am actually inspired. LOL

Z

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At 2009.04.17 08:50, Brosreview said:

This one is super-sensual mate!!! Expressions, feelings come out quite clean and clear here. Good job!!!

PS: Thanks for your comment at my stop.

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At 2009.04.17 12:59, zorlone said:

Brosreview,

Thanks for appreciating this poem. I tried to be as real as I can. But, of course, poems are more lovely if they are part of a surreal thought.

Z

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At 2009.04.17 15:43, tiffany said:

nice poem ..hoping it will soon become real for you. iprioritize mo na po kasi ang paghahanap! (lol) just joking

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At 2009.04.17 17:24, zorlone said:

Thanks Tiffany for the comment!

Z

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At 2009.04.18 07:31, Gabriel Gadfly said:

This is a pretty good poem. I like the alternating alignments of the stanzas. I think the heavy endrhyme is limiting, but it might work for this sort of heavy poem. I don’t think the word “whiff” works in this sentence though — it lacks the sensuality that the other word choices have.

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At 2009.04.18 13:34, zorlone said:

Thanks for commenting Gabriel!
I read your poem this morning too! Very creative and a good read!

I have just gotten back into writing roughly three months ago, so, please bear with me as I struggle to re-learn this delicate art.

I am grateful to your pointers, maybe I will be able to find my own style in writing. I will drop by your site once in a while to find out more about your technique in writing.

Z

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At 2009.04.20 14:57, Webbielady said:

So many fans out there! Just read all the comments and they make the already interesting piece more interesting.

BTW, in that anagram (Zorlone), does it include the first letter of your lastname? I am trying to put it in the correct order but am thinking it might be your name then the first letter of your last name? Well, curiousity kills the cat. ^^

Your poems inhibit deep passion.

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At 2009.04.20 15:04, zorlone said:

Hi Webbielady,

Zorlone is the anagram of my first name only. hehehe! I think you already figured that out, didn’t you?

I was rushing when I made this very first blog so that was the name I came up with. It stuck with me and I shall be using it for as long as it takes. heheh

Lainy’s site is like a haven for traffic, there were many readers since I joined her contest. I’m glad I did.

Thank you for commenting too… I am going out, but I will be back to your site later.

Z

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At 2009.04.24 14:43, sudharm baxi said:

This one is sensual, lovely and of course beautiful, great piece for sure.

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At 2009.04.24 16:03, zorlone said:

Sudharm,

Thank you! I tried to make it as sensual as I could.

Z

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At 2009.05.04 17:09, chin:] said:

nice poem, really. ^^

always keep in touch:]

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At 2010.02.24 05:39, red_butterfly said:

wow!! your poem are so cool!

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At 2010.02.27 11:43, Zorlone said:

Thank you red_butterfly,

Do come back and visit.

Z

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