Haiku: On a rainy day
08.20.09
Taken with permission from deyedoctor's flickr account
Hazy glass
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Dark and cool hallway,
reflecting the storm outside.
Mist forms on glass walls.
Mall
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Cool and bright spaces,
goods swimming behind glass walls.
Shopping indulgence
Rainy steps
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I slipped while walking,
on a paved slippery steps.
The clouds kept laughing.
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Zorlone, an anagram of my name. A title fitting to this blog of mine. Words are created every time such as blogs created online. This site will showcase thoughts translated into words. Dream. Create. Inspire. Follow me in Twitter @Zorlone or visit me too at 140 Flash Fiction.
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Grey wall, waterlogged,
looms against the wind’s backdrop;
Arced prism of light.
Light shatters silence,
it’s aftermath, dark rumbling…
ominous clouds form.
@Holly,
Wow! That blew me away. Like the Monsoon attacking a fig tree, I’ll shed my leaves from your wrath.
Z
haiku?.. pards anu ibig sbihin nito..he he he.
Hai naku! Haiku! This is great, Z. You’re one flexible poet. Able to write about anything in any form of poetry. Keep it up!
@Luke,
Thanks pare! Thanks! Napansin ko lang kapag nasa work ako, mas madami akong ideas kapag di ako nagdadrive. Nakakasulat kasi ako, unlike while driving, err… delikado pare!
Z
sinubukan ko ring gumawa ng haiku tulad ni Madame Jahangirikaso di ko kinaya. hehe
@Badong,
Try and try lang yan pare.
Z
explain mo daw kung ano ang Haiku – tanong ni Ever. Can you explain a haiku in a haiku? hehe. challenge!
Reyjr,
Di ko yata alam yun. LOL. Magtanong tayo sa mga experts. hehehe
Z
naku, wala pa akong poem!! hehe. again, nice work! what do the numbers after the titles represent?
i like the photo too.
Don’t worry, there’s no rush with the poem. Gawa ka lang when you have time.
Thanks Reena!
Z
@Hi Reena!
No rush, basta take your time in making your own poem and in your own pace. Malay mo makagawa ka ng obra maestro mo. Pabasa mo sa akin ha?
Z
PS The numbers represent the date and time the poems were created.
Rainy steps wow! i can just imagine. lol!
@Ceblogger,
Ganun na nga! The floor was slippery so we should be careful with our steps.
Z