This day is great (A list poem completed)

08.29.09

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This day is great because I have started to write,
a new list poem for everyone’s delight.

This day is great I have eaten my fill,1
she took me to lunch and then paid for the bill!1

This day is great, I have eaten my fill.2

The food was so rich that I needed a pill.2

This day is great; I won the big prize!2
Two Happy Meals and six orders of fries.2

This day is great because I have written another story. 3
Now, I only have 15 more blogs to worry. 3

This day is great I sang ’til my songs, 1
echoed in my ears like big Chinese gongs. 1

This day is great ’cause I went out despondent, 4
and came back resplendent with the joy of fulfillment. 4

This day is great even though once more, it’s raining, 5
will be having a dinner and end the night by singing. 5

This day was great – I looked up to the moon, 1
and whispered, “the sun will rise up again soon.” 1

Thank you to the contributors

Reyjr – 1
Holly – 2
Roy – 3
Jena – 4
Madz – 5

Tags: list poem, poetry
Category: Light Poems.

About the author: Zorlone

Zorlone, an anagram of my name. A title fitting to this blog of mine. Words are created every time such as blogs created online. This site will showcase thoughts translated into words. Dream. Create. Inspire. Follow me in Twitter @Zorlone or visit me too at 140 Flash Fiction.

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2 Responses to “This day is great (A list poem completed)”

d'Arch Angel says:

August 30, 2009 at 5:33 pm

Very nice, Z! So this is a list poem? Daming forms ano?

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- Zorlone says:
  
  August 31, 2009 at 9:50 pm
  
  @Luke,
  
  Thanks! Yeah.. Ang di ko magawa e yung mga poems na merong stress sa mga words. like da-DUM in the pronunciation. I have no idea how to use them. It would be great if I can find a way to learn. LOL. Marry an American perhaps? LOL. I want to create the Shakesperian style in poetry. His sonnets. I think they’re cool.
  
  Z
  
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