Hunting Season

09.02.09

Photo credits to Kris Kros

Photo credits to Kris Kros

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After the kill

I roar from this bounty!
Triumph over a formidable prey.
This hunt bore a fruitful prize,
for hungry mouths that eagerly await.

The chase

Adrenaline peaked into an insane level,
as I leapt out of my hiding place!
Running toward a challenging arsenal,
this wind of a run on my face.


Stalking

I crept in silent gait – hidden,
nothing was missed, my senses sniffed.
A tremulous thought of primal talents,
hunting with nothing more than my gifts.

Detection

A distance asunder from my reward,
this need to feed the self and family.
Forewarned signs of a living beast,
braving the borders of my territory.

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10 Comments

  • At 2009.09.03 09:13, yatot said:

    very nice descriptions, indeed! this reminds me of a poem i wrote in one of the issues of our science magazine… it’s about hunting and preys… hehehe… good work!

    • At 2009.09.03 09:16, Roy said:

      I love the picture!

      wow! a reversed sequence!

      just like having a flashback hehe… if I were the hunter, at least I would know what I did and I can replicate it ;)

      another great experiment Z!

      • At 2009.09.03 09:58, madz said:

        Every scene reminds me of a character from movies, like Diego of Ice Age 3 and the tracker of Bella Swan :P

        • At 2009.09.03 16:28, jan geronimo said:

          Reminds me of Apocalypto. Okay I got it backwards. The protagonist is of course the prey. Run, baby, run! :)

          • At 2009.09.05 06:55, Zorlone said:

            @Madz,

            Cool! I also enjoyed Ice Age 3 and Twilight. It must be the animation in the former and the sci-fi thriller of the latter.

            Z

            • At 2009.09.05 06:57, Zorlone said:

              @Jan,

              I have to google Apocalypto. The picture came in after the creation of the poem. I was thinking of something else actually.

              Z

              • At 2009.09.05 10:27, Jena Isle said:

                I remember Zombies by Brady Frost. This is a different perspective too. The hunter now being the hunted as the hunted waits for the hunter.

                • At 2009.09.06 02:10, Pasyalera said:

                  The image reminds me of my childhood days when I used to go to Star City with my family to see those Dinosaurs. :P

                  • At 2009.09.08 02:24, G. said:

                    Hah I liked the way you went backwards with this one. Although if a T-Rex was that poetic, I wonder what all the other dinos are thinking eh? xD

                    This is a beautiful new site you got; congrats!

                    • At 2009.09.08 20:30, Zorlone said:

                      @Jena,

                      You could say that. I was trying to look for that kind of picture but, wasn’t able to find one. But this one also worked.

                      @Wayne,

                      I was a Dino-nerd when I was younger. He he he. Always liked the prehistoric creatures. I thought I would have become an Archeologist.

                      @G

                      Yeah, a reversed sequence. Glad you made it here buddy!

                      Z

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