Overflowing

09.12.09

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Colored liquids flowing,
inside my thirsty mind.
I drink a glass not knowing,
the hunger grew strong inside.

One sip, one gulp – a shot,
Unlimited consumption.
I breathe and swallowed up,
unbearable assumptions.

Drowning in my head,
the room danced around me.
Hesitation never sheds,
the music and the melodies.

Another round of drinks,
my inner satisfaction,
No slowing down, no tricks,
my drunken sweet addiction.

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Zorlone, an anagram of my name. A title fitting to this blog of mine. Words are created every time such as blogs created online. This site will showcase thoughts translated into words. Dream. Create. Inspire. Follow me in Twitter @Zorlone or visit me too at 140 Flash Fiction.

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15 Responses to “Overflowing”

  1. jan geronimo says:

    The little scene you painted – why is it so familiar to me, eh? Ahahaha.

    Well, here I am – lest I go afoul with my petty notions yet again- gulping down my unbearable assumptions.

    One for the road, dude. Please? :)

  2. madz says:

    Lasing ka na Doc Z? JOKE!

  3. tashabud says:

    Hi Z,
    I could clearly visualize the entire scene of your poem.

    Tasha

  4. Jhong Medina says:

    Sabado Nights!!! Dyan-dyan !!!! INUMAN NA PRE! KAMPAY!!!!!!!

  5. Zorlone says:

    @Jan,

    This is a familiar scene for a lot of people. Specially those who love to satisfy a nasty little urge. You know what I mean.

    Cheers!

    Z

  6. Zorlone says:

    @Madz,

    Di pa naman. he he he. Umiinom ka ba?

    Z

  7. Zorlone says:

    @Jhong,

    Balita ko magpapainom ka daw? Kelan ba yun?

    Z

  8. yatot says:

    kahit hindi ako umiinom.. sa tingin ko lasing na ako dito sa iyong tula… waaahhahaa.. hik!

  9. Jena Isle says:

    Ganoon ba Doc? I hope not. Iyong patikim tikim na iyan kung minsan hindi na sapat. It’s like an “ambrosia” , makes one a crapulous person, eventually. You get inured to the side effects and then “look” for them even in the stillness of the night.

    He he he, but I know, this is only a poem. So, what am I worried of? right?

    Perfect!

    • Zorlone says:

      @Jena,

      This poem was inspired by an album I saw at the clinic. One of the owners celebrated his birthday and had a surreal party at their house. I was inspired by the bar they set up for the guests. I wasn’t able to go there because I was somewhere else. ;)

      Z

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