Random Haiku Series
09.18.09
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Clam Up
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Your tight lips clam up,
unwilling to speak up now.
I’d kiss them open.
Fickle Minded
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Unfocused mindset.
Drowning in indecisions,
last gulp of fresh air.
Play Time
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Bowling balls upstairs,
rolling on dark clouds – a strike!
crisscrossed lighting fell.
About the author: Zorlone
Zorlone, an anagram of my name. A title fitting to this blog of mine. Words are created every time such as blogs created online. This site will showcase thoughts translated into words. Dream. Create. Inspire. Follow me in Twitter @Zorlone or visit me too at 140 Flash Fiction.
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I can relate to the Play Time Doc Z. Nung bata kasi ako, kapag kasi kumukulog, lagi sinasabi ng mga magulang ko na nagbobowling si San Pedro
@Madz,
Oo nga e, ganun din ako nung bata hanggang ngayon. Coincidentally, umuulan, kumukulog, at kumikidlat nung sinulat ko itong haiku na ‘to.
Z
nakakakuha ako ng style,pwede palang gawin ng kapaligiran ng thoughts na mula sa kalikasan.
akala ko kanina yung number na 0917 eh mga number ng globe, joke!
fickleminded – parang ako ito, pero teka parang hindi rin.
Sus akala ko kung ano na un play time. Lakas talaga ng influence ni Bonnie. lols.
I love “Clam Up.” Seafood diet kasi ako eh. Yay. Hayaan mo na, Doc Z. lols
That first one…Clam Up…leaves the reader with a sudden and surprising feeling of erocita…
oh my!
Lol! Favorite ko yun nalunod ka kasi di maka decide kung ano gagawin. Haha!
OOps.
Beautiful! Smooth and elegant.
Oh, my, indeed, Jan… true, though.
Funny, the last one: My parents used to tell me that thunder was the sound of God bowling with the angels, and getting a strike! The angels would cry – thus the rain. Isn’t it funny how children are always afraid of the harmless, but noisy thunder, and rarely afraid of the very real danger of the brilliant streaks of light zigzagging through the sky?
I kept hearing those phrases left and right and decided to use them in a haiku. Albeit, there were probably several other poets who have used them in a poem, I just hope there are no two Zorlones out there. LOL
I like the part about the angels crying. I'd get my revenge from my grumpy Guardian Angel. ehehe
Z
I kept hearing those phrases left and right and decided to use them in a haiku. Albeit, there were probably several other poets who have used them in a poem, I just hope there are no two Zorlones out there. LOL
I like the part about the angels crying. I'd get my revenge from my grumpy Guardian Angel. ehehe
Z
Hi Heather,
Thank you for the compliment. it's the first time I got “elegant” as a praise. I might just get used to that and quote you.
Z
Reyjr,
Sabi na magugustuhan mo yun e. ehehe. Bakti nga kaya, huh?
Z
C,
Yet, I had to divert their thoughts to other things, so that their jaws would close from too much expectations.
Z
Jan,
Oo sya ang pinakaimfuential sa lahat. ehehee.
Z
Amor,
LOL. natawa ako dun sa comment mo, muntik na ako gumawa ng serious na reply.
Z
Pareng Ever,
Pwedeng pwede!
Z