Storm

10.06.09

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From the oceans,
my body grew,
each vapor
condensed in my torso,
Seas shook
when I stretched out my arms,
specially when I touched
the land you claimed.

This fearsome breath -
you called.
A mere whistle by my standards.
My powerful strides recognize
only One higher power.

“Prepare for my coming – little ones,
my step demolishes your fragile lives.
I engraved in your ancestors’ memories,
my unmistakable wrath.”

As I diminished from this short journey,
traces of my path surfaced
stories told by your hate.
A pebble thrown at a giant.

I wait for no man,
for I am the storm.
A rebirth from the groins of my mother Gaia
I shall punish your uncaring ways -
once more.

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12 Comments

  • At 2009.10.06 16:55, gagay said:

    nice one! :)

    • At 2009.10.06 17:14, JeD Chan said:

      Solid Doc Z.

      Why man asks nature.
      On why it destroyed their home.
      When nature ne’er asks.

      • At 2009.10.06 20:46, Zorlone said:

        Gagay,

        Thanks! :D

        Z

        • At 2009.10.06 20:48, Zorlone said:

          JeD,

          You are right! This is but a glimpse of what a storm would say, of course, it wont be exactly like this. he he he. Nice stanza.

          Z

          • At 2009.10.07 02:32, Jena Isle said:

            This is another enterprising perception you have taken – that of the voice of a natural force. I like these powerful lines; they aptly describe what a storm does to humans. Men are indeed insignificant even in its burgeoning stages.

            “Prepare for my coming – little ones,
            my step demolishes your fragile lives.
            I engraved in your ancestors’ memories,
            my unmistakable wrath.”

            Well composed, Doc Z.

            • At 2009.10.07 07:14, zorlone said:

              Jen,

              I wanted to give a voice to the storm's awesomely destructive power. This was written in admiration and respect to it's might.

              Thanks!

              Z

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                • At 2009.10.08 01:14, Name said:

                  Powerful poem Z… you really captured the essence of mother nature.
                  ~Robin

                  • At 2009.10.08 01:55, zorlone said:

                    Thank you Robin!

                    Z

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