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WOOF Contest – Top Picks 10/23/2009 | Zorlone - Filipino Poet and Writer — Tue, 27 Oct 2009 06:51:16 +0000

[...] – “Storm” – A voice to the storm’s awesomely destructive power. This was written in admiration and [...]

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Angel in the winners' circle | The Struggling Blogger dot com — Tue, 27 Oct 2009 04:00:00 +0000

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By: WOOF Contest Results for October 23rd « Wanderer Thoughts

WOOF Contest Results for October 23rd « Wanderer Thoughts — Tue, 27 Oct 2009 01:22:39 +0000

[...] – “Storm” – A voice to the storm’s awesomely destructive power. This was written in admiration and [...]

By: zorlone

zorlone — Thu, 08 Oct 2009 06:55:16 +0000

Thank you Robin!

By: Name

Name — Thu, 08 Oct 2009 06:14:00 +0000

Powerful poem Z… you really captured the essence of mother nature.
~Robin

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Phone Number | Zorlone - Filipino Poet and Writer — Thu, 08 Oct 2009 03:16:42 +0000

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By: zorlone

zorlone — Wed, 07 Oct 2009 12:14:13 +0000

Jen,

I wanted to give a voice to the storm's awesomely destructive power. This was written in admiration and respect to it's might.

Thanks!

Z

By: Jena Isle

Jena Isle — Wed, 07 Oct 2009 07:32:20 +0000

This is another enterprising perception you have taken - that of the voice of a natural force. I like these powerful lines; they aptly describe what a storm does to humans. Men are indeed insignificant even in its burgeoning stages.

“Prepare for my coming – little ones,
my step demolishes your fragile lives.
I engraved in your ancestors’ memories,
my unmistakable wrath.”

Well composed, Doc Z.

By: Zorlone

Zorlone — Tue, 06 Oct 2009 12:48:22 +0000

JeD,

You are right! This is but a glimpse of what a storm would say, of course, it wont be exactly like this. he he he. Nice stanza.

By: Zorlone

Zorlone — Tue, 06 Oct 2009 12:46:28 +0000

Gagay,

Thanks!