A Short Visit
10.09.09
Image Rights to John Davey 2008
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A mystically lucid dream,
shared between friends of old days.
Wondering what reality it means,
asking for reasons since Wednesday.
Meeting in a land down under,
smiles ready to embrace the face.
This energy of athletic brilliance and wonder,
touch of a healer’s hands with grace.
A virtual enjoyment continues,
all, but a few minutes in fulfilling length.
A shower of blessings and values,
with the guidance from an Omniscient strength.
Slipping thoughts of surreal essence,
looking forward through time and space.
Conflicting decisions without license,
this journey with the Sandman’s desirable place.
About the author: Zorlone
Zorlone, an anagram of my name. A title fitting to this blog of mine. Words are created every time such as blogs created online. This site will showcase thoughts translated into words. Dream. Create. Inspire. Follow me in Twitter @Zorlone or visit me too at 140 Flash Fiction.
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Haiku april 19, 2010
great poem.. i think the dream will come true
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I hope so too Mae. Thanks for the visit.
Z
love it!
Love: A mystically lucid dream, and
Slipping thoughts of surreal essence.
Some great thought went into this poem!
“Slipping thoughts of surreal essence,
looking forward through time and space.
Conflicting decisions without license”
I love this one Doc…looking forward through time and space…how about going beyond time and space. that surely ends up as the longest short visit for someone.
Definitely worth looking into Elmot! You gave me a good idea!
Z
Your new comment gadget is slowing down your loading time and becoming very irritating in the process… grrrrrrrah….
This poem means something to me that I can't tell to you…but I think that it's weird…because it seems like I wrote it in my head…then you wrote it with a pen…
hmmmm…..
I do hope that you got the hang of it C.
Wouldn't want to miss your comments on my blog.
I wonder if that would be defined under “Serendipity?” I guess I would have to wait for you to tell me, that is if you want to.
Z
Well, maybe you can define it under that word…but then add something more complex than that, to it…and that would probably be what it is….
a sad mixture of hope and loss and confusion….sigh…..
So Doc Z, How's your short visit? Did you got your answers and reasons that your looking for?
BTW, Already posted your guest post at my personal blog. Splendid work!
Here's the link.
Jhong,
The answers would just have more questions for follow up. I'm just insatiable when it comes to soul searching.
Thanks for the guest post dude.
Z
Enjayneer,
Thanks bro!
Z
Coffee Table Poetry,
You are right, I made a draft first then edited and edited and edited to my hearts content. he he he
Thank you!
Z
C,
Like what I felt about this poem, a sad mixture of hope, loss, and confusion. Sometimes, looking at it in plain sight doesn't make it easier to decide what to do.
Z
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nice poem and picture. overall I think you have a great looking website. I wish I could visit that place, keep up the good work man.