Twin Souls

10.29.09

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Symmetry.
A paired reflection
looking innocently
at each other’s beauty.

Even in numbers,
opposite ends the same
no in betweens,
just part of the other pair.

A set.
Waiting for contradiction.
Feeling each other’s pain,
reflecting in unison.

Lines.
Appearing as intersections.
Symmetry and perfection
reflecting in each other’s eyes.

Twin souls,
brought together,
seeking the other,
hoping to be
whole.

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Zorlone, an anagram of my name. A title fitting to this blog of mine. Words are created every time such as blogs created online. This site will showcase thoughts translated into words. Dream. Create. Inspire. Follow me in Twitter @Zorlone or visit me too at 140 Flash Fiction.

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21 Comments

  • At 2009.10.29 10:32, Heather Kephart said:

    Hey Zorolne, that's really good! People should put that on their engagement announcements. :)

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    • At 2009.10.29 10:57, zorlone said:

      Yeah! I think I can make money writing wedding vows LOL

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      • At 2009.10.29 21:12, Jena Isle said:

        During occasions , like the yuletide season, valentine's day or even this All souls', All saints' day internet surfers/searchers are always looking for short quotes/poems to use in their emails. Your site could attract a large amount of traffic if you use “searchable” words or SEO lingo. Maximize your site.

        A touching poem of soul mates finally finding one another – way to go.

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        • At 2009.10.30 01:25, Noelle Dotillos said:

          Wowwwwww. :) I love it. I'll remind myself to contact you if I want to use this SOMEDAY. Hahahaha!

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          • At 2009.10.30 01:33, jangeronimo said:

            Ah, happy souls…

            Me, I call myself a line. Not the line of sweet powder on a coffee table, but a skeptical line that abhors the hype about intersecting lines. Lines ending in consummation – blurring of lines and form.

            Well, it's just me – a squiggly line despairing at the sight of another squiggly scribble, despairing the truth that in this lifetime never shall our lines intersect. Because the cold hard truth is that we're two parallel lines, from here to frigging eternity.

            Sorry for leaving a glob of ink on your page. :)

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            • At 2009.10.30 20:13, Holly Jahangiri said:

              What's wrong with squiggly scribbles?? If they squiggle enough, they'll happily cross paths and get all messily entangled with each other numerous times between here and eternity. Unfortunately, someone's always determined to stab a DOT at the end of the line. Period. We squiggles never quite make it to eternity. But we can have fun trying!

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              • At 2009.10.30 20:14, Holly Jahangiri said:

                So funny, because I read this more literally – twins, each whole, but also half of the whole, needing the other to be complete. I like it on all levels, Doc.

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                • At 2009.10.30 20:25, jangeronimo said:

                  Unfortunate that it's me who stabs a dot at the end of the line. Talk about stubbing myself in my squiggly foot. Love this: “If they squiggle enough, they'll happily cross paths…” :)

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                  • At 2009.10.31 09:50, zorlone said:

                    Will be learning how to do that soon. I have excellent teachers after all. he he he. With your support, I might be able to start an online business that way. LOL. (dreaming big)

                    Thank you

                    Z

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                    • At 2009.10.31 10:44, zorlone said:

                      You know where to find me Noelle. :)

                      Z

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                      • At 2009.10.31 10:50, zorlone said:

                        Had I known better, I would think that your reply was a post in itself. Reflections of Jan, writing to exhale page one. he he he.

                        Ramble on anytime.

                        Z

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                        • At 2009.10.31 10:51, zorlone said:

                          And having fun is the least we can get out of writing.

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                          • At 2009.10.31 10:53, zorlone said:

                            Thanks Holly! There are so many levels that I just want to cover all at once here. Such is the mind. Trying to speak out what it truly feels, but end up offering something else.

                            Z

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                            • At 2009.10.31 10:54, zorlone said:

                              It makes sense, huh? so keep squiggling. ;)

                              Z

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                              • At 2009.10.31 11:25, jangeronimo said:

                                You think? At least, I can write in my friends' comment section. I'm a
                                fugitive from my own blog, you see – no post to serve my readers! :(

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                                • At 2009.10.31 11:49, Jena Isle said:

                                  And Jan, your slot is waiting too in my blog. he he he..Keep squiggling , it pays not to give up.

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                                  • At 2009.10.31 19:29, zorlone said:

                                    Everyone deserves to have a break. Even the wicked LOL

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                                    • At 2009.10.31 20:39, jangeronimo said:

                                      Yeah, I know, Jen. :)

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                                      • At 2009.10.31 20:40, jangeronimo said:

                                        The implication is delicious. Duly noted, Doc Z.

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