Dance into the Night
11.09.09
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Let’s dance again,
to a melody of soft music.
Just two shadows,
shifting
in the background of a bliss.
Moving
with our united frame,
as our bodies float,
on notes struck by a violin.
The breeze,
of a cool silent air,
stirs with the warmth
of our tune.
Tonight
I bathe in our sweet embrace.
As we entangle ourselves,
with raw instinct.
The reverberation of a drum
beating passionately
as we reached the finale
with an explosion.
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Where’s the fan, Z? You’re supposed to hand us ladies a fan before we read such steamy, romantic poetry. ::throwing myself across the couch in a mock faint::
Great poem. I like the way it moves…
Thanks Holly,
I have been an absentee administrator in my own blog lately and sometimes the comments surprise me too. Of course, there are comments from friends that I know who can read through my poems. ::wink::
Thank you, here’s an ice cold water and a fan.
Z
A tall glass of cold water please. Yaya, please prepare my bath. Cold.
Happy birthday, studmuffin.
Would you like to trade that cold water for an ice cold tea? he he he. Perhaps a cold beer?
Thank you Jan!!!
Z
yo! LOL. happy birthday doc zorlone. How old are you? Keep up the good work. Long live doc z.
Born on the year of the Snake in seventy seven, bro.
Thank you geb0i!
Z
Happy Birthday Doc P!
(as what my kids call you)
Roy,
Being doc P is a compliment, specially coming from your zorlonious kids.
Z
Happy Birthday Bro! Another great stuff you have here.
Kampay!
Thanks Jhong!!!
I’ll treat you later… or maybe sooner. Whichever comes first.
Z
That is excellent, Zorlone! Now, are you familiar with Barry White? I can totally picture his low voice reading out your poem with bass and orchestration in the background…
Heather,
I think my dad sings Barry White during videoke nights here at our home. Ah, good suggestion! I haven’t figured out how to follow the instructions Justin gave me on how to record my voice so that I could publish podcasts here too.
Soon, I’ll be able to do that. November is almost nearing its end.
Z
Doc Z, how can you possibly do these? Writing for the NaNoWriMo, writing short stories, writing poems, and attending to patients. Oh how can I forgot you also play badminton. Did you still got to sleep? LOL!
Let’s DANCE!
Madz,
I think I have been an absentee blogger for the longest time and haven’t been able to return to my own blog to rely to comments. Well, I better shape up and find time LOL.
My story is not yet done (for nanowrimo) I am stuck half way, but there are still so many stories and chapters to tell. I will be quick to reply as soon as I finish.
Yikes, December is editing month huhuhu…
Wish me luck!
Z
As a poet, you can get away with anything and not be rated PG. The explosion , I hope, was contained…he he he…Happy birthday, again.
Jena,
That would have been an implosion. he he he. I wonder why Jan missed this cool comment of yours. tsk tsk tsk he is getting rusty.
Z
Awww, belated happy birthday Doc Zi!
Thank you Wayne!
Di na natuloy ang EB natin.
Z
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