Haiku: Kiss

01.09.10

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Cold Morning
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Kiss of morning breeze
Brought shivers to my warm skin
I inhaled snowflakes.

Unexpected feeling
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Bare feet kissed the floor
Metal sheet carved cold blisters
A shock of surprise

Warming up
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Greetings with goosebumps
From an icy kiss of snow
Temperature rose

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9 Responses to “Haiku: Kiss”

  1. Joji says:

    More power to the poet in you, Doc Z.
    My haiku try:

    I, Composed “,)

    Floating, fleeting thoughts
    In playful, carefree wanders
    Tranquil excitement

  2. Very lovely poem Lorenzo. I like it.
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  3. Zorlone says:

    Thanks Joji,

    I love your haiku… there is peace in your words.

    Z

  4. Zorlone says:

    Hi Janette,

    Thank you! I enjoyed making these haiku.

    Z

  5. Chilly, but strangely warming, too. Very nice, Doc.
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  6. C says:

    hhhhmmmmmm…..inhaling snowflakes during a kiss….now that is something right there…..

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  8. Nice poem, I always wondered what are those numbers inserted into your poems, are they like digital fingerprints or copyrights?
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  9. Mr. Cheesy says:

    beautiful and lovely.
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