Haiku: Kiss
01.09.10
Cold Morning
1217200906460650
Kiss of morning breeze
Brought shivers to my warm skin
I inhaled snowflakes.
Unexpected feeling
1217200906540659
Bare feet kissed the floor
Metal sheet carved cold blisters
A shock of surprise
Warming up
1217200907080711
Greetings with goosebumps
From an icy kiss of snow
Temperature rose
GD Star Rating
loading...
comments feed •
trackback • leave a response •
loading...













More power to the poet in you, Doc Z.
My haiku try:
I, Composed “,)
Floating, fleeting thoughts
In playful, carefree wanders
Tranquil excitement
Thanks Joji,
I love your haiku… there is peace in your words.
Z
Very lovely poem Lorenzo. I like it.
Janette Toral´s last blog ..Building a Tribe: can you lead us?
Hi Janette,
Thank you! I enjoyed making these haiku.
Z
Chilly, but strangely warming, too. Very nice, Doc.
Holly Jahangiri´s last blog ..So, Jan…
hhhhmmmmmm…..inhaling snowflakes during a kiss….now that is something right there…..
[...] This post was mentioned on Twitter by Gem, Lorenzo Bernardino. Lorenzo Bernardino said: Currently reading Haiku: Kiss http://tr.im/JQ8D [...]
Nice poem, I always wondered what are those numbers inserted into your poems, are they like digital fingerprints or copyrights?
Dragon Blogger´s last blog ..More Technology Equals More Power Consumption
beautiful and lovely.
Mr. Cheesy´s last blog ..Love Letter Template